Talk:Kilroy's on Kirkwood
Good start, but needs some re-write
Think we need to re-write this for a NPOV and to sound less like an advertisement. Anecdotes are cool for the discussion page, but we need to stick to facts on the page. Would be great if we could get this broken up into paragraphs, too.
- Yeah, this thing is horrific. Like, why mention that it's not only frequented by students, but by visitors and townies? Doesn't that just mean everyone goes there? I snipped this a bit, and took out the "you must visit to see our unique atomsphere blah blah". -Jkonrath 13:08, 13 October 2007 (EDT)